Every year, Alie receives the same amount of money from 7 different people as a birthday present. On each birthday, after she receives all her money, her sister secretly takes away 8 dollars from Alie's birthday savings. If this happens for 3 years and she has 102 dollars in her birthday savings, how much money did she receive from each individual on her birthday?
Every year, Alie receives the same amount of money from 7 different people as a birthday present. On each birthday, after she receives all her money, her sister secretly takes away 8 dollars from Alie's birthday savings. This happens for three years, when Alie decides to divide her money into quarters for organization reasons, so she divides her money by four. She finds that one quarter is $25.50. How much money did she receive from each person on her birthday each year?
The story does make sense with the equation. It is functional with the story and I would write this equation in the story. It is not confusing and there aren't any grammar mistakes. I think this story is creative because they used birthday as their example.
1) Does the story fit with the equation? Is it functional? Would you actually write this equation from this word story problem? We think that the story fits with the equation very well. The story itself made sense with the equation and the equation worked well and functional with the story, too. We would write this equation from this word story problem.
2) Does it make sense, or is it a little confusing? Discuss what is not clear, and suggest improvements. We think that it is half-and-half; it makes sense well, but also confusing. We thought that the part about when it was happening for three years and also the part when Alie decides to divide the money for organization. We think that this word problem will improve more if they used better word choices.
3) Are there any grammatical mistakes? How should they be corrected? There were no grammatical mistakes!
4) Is the story creative? How could it be made better? This story is creative and sounds very possible in daily life.
5) What are the positive points about the word problem? This word problem was accurate, creative, and also well-stated.
1) Does the story fit with the equation? Is it functional? Would you actually write this equation from this word story problem? I think this story fits with the equation very well. It’s easy for reader to understand what is happening. I think it’s an good story that can help make the reader solve it easily.
2) Does it make sense, or is it a little confusing? Discuss what is not clear, and suggest improvements. It does make sense a lot, and it is easy to understand.
3) Are there any grammatical mistakes? How should they be corrected? I don’t think there are any grammar mistakes.
4) Is the story creative? How could it be made better? I think the story is creative because they used many different words substituting ‘subtracting, adding,multiplying,etc’
What are the positive points about the word problem? The positive points are that it is simple (without any un-necessary words) and easy to understand.
Every year, Tweety receives the same amount of money from 7 different lady bugs as a birthday present. On each birthday, after she receives all her money, Bugs-Bunny secretly takes away 8 dollars from Tweety's birthday savings. This happens for 3 birthdays, when Tweety decides to divide her birthday savings into quarters for organization reasons, so she divides her money by 4. She finds that one quarter of her savings is $25.50. How much money did she receive from each person on her birthday each year?
Every year, Tweety receives the same amount of money from 7 different lady bugs as a birthday present. On each birthday, after she receives all her money, Bugs-Bunny secretly takes away 8 dollars from Tweety's birthday savings. This happens for 3 birthdays, when Tweety decides to divide her birthday savings into quarters for organization reasons, so she divides her money by 4. She finds that one quarter of her savings is $25.50. How much money did she receive from each lady bug on her birthday each year?
Every year, Tweety receives the same amount of money from 7 different lady bugs as a birthday present. On each birthday, after he receives all his money, Bugs-Bunny secretly takes away 8 dollars from Tweety's birthday savings. This happens for 3 birthdays, when Tweety decides to divide his birthday savings into quarters for organization reasons, so he divides his money by 4. He finds that one quarter of his savings is $25.50. How much money did he receive from each lady bug on his birthday each year?
Every year, Alie receives the same amount of money from 7 different people as a birthday present. On each birthday, after she receives all her money, her sister secretly takes away 8 dollars from Alie's birthday savings. If this happens for 3 years and she has 102 dollars in her birthday savings, how much money did she receive from each individual on her birthday?
ReplyDeleteEvery year, Alie receives the same amount of money from 7 different people as a birthday present. On each birthday, after she receives all her money, her sister secretly takes away 8 dollars from Alie's birthday savings. This happens for three years, when Alie decides to divide her money into quarters for organization reasons, so she divides her money by four. She finds that one quarter is $25.50. How much money did she receive from each person on her birthday each year?
ReplyDeleteThe story does make sense with the equation. It is functional with the story and I would write this equation in the story. It is not confusing and there aren't any grammar mistakes. I think this story is creative because they used birthday as their example.
ReplyDelete1) Does the story fit with the equation? Is it functional? Would you actually write this equation from this word story problem?
ReplyDeleteWe think that the story fits with the equation very well. The story itself made sense with the equation and the equation worked well and functional with the story, too. We would write this equation from this word story problem.
2) Does it make sense, or is it a little confusing? Discuss what is not clear, and suggest improvements.
We think that it is half-and-half; it makes sense well, but also confusing. We thought that the part about when it was happening for three years and also the part when Alie decides to divide the money for organization. We think that this word problem will improve more if they used better word choices.
3) Are there any grammatical mistakes? How should they be corrected?
There were no grammatical mistakes!
4) Is the story creative? How could it be made better?
This story is creative and sounds very possible in daily life.
5) What are the positive points about the word problem?
This word problem was accurate, creative, and also well-stated.
1) Does the story fit with the equation? Is it functional? Would you actually write this equation from this word story problem?
ReplyDeleteI think this story fits with the equation very well. It’s easy for reader to understand what is happening. I think it’s an good story that can help make the reader solve it easily.
2) Does it make sense, or is it a little confusing? Discuss what is not clear, and suggest improvements.
It does make sense a lot, and it is easy to understand.
3) Are there any grammatical mistakes? How should they be corrected?
I don’t think there are any grammar mistakes.
4) Is the story creative? How could it be made better?
I think the story is creative because they used many different words substituting ‘subtracting, adding,multiplying,etc’
What are the positive points about the word problem?
The positive points are that it is simple (without any un-necessary words) and easy to understand.
Every year, Tweety receives the same amount of money from 7 different lady bugs as a birthday present. On each birthday, after she receives all her money, Bugs-Bunny secretly takes away 8 dollars from Tweety's birthday savings. This happens for 3 birthdays, when Tweety decides to divide her birthday savings into quarters for organization reasons, so she divides her money by 4. She finds that one quarter of her savings is $25.50. How much money did she receive from each person on her birthday each year?
ReplyDeleteEvery year, Tweety receives the same amount of money from 7 different lady bugs as a birthday present. On each birthday, after she receives all her money, Bugs-Bunny secretly takes away 8 dollars from Tweety's birthday savings. This happens for 3 birthdays, when Tweety decides to divide her birthday savings into quarters for organization reasons, so she divides her money by 4. She finds that one quarter of her savings is $25.50. How much money did she receive from each lady bug on her birthday each year?
ReplyDeleteEvery year, Tweety receives the same amount of money from 7 different lady bugs as a birthday present. On each birthday, after he receives all his money, Bugs-Bunny secretly takes away 8 dollars from Tweety's birthday savings. This happens for 3 birthdays, when Tweety decides to divide his birthday savings into quarters for organization reasons, so he divides his money by 4. He finds that one quarter of his savings is $25.50. How much money did he receive from each lady bug on his birthday each year?
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