Monday, October 17, 2011

Equation #7

6 comments:

  1. Yumi Kim & Anna JeonOctober 17, 2011 at 6:28 PM

    There are 100 days in Phineas and Ferb’s summer break. There are 7days a week, how many weeks has passed if there are 44 days of the summer break left?

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  2. Michelle Bae and Ina YounNovember 1, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    1) Does the story fit with the equation? Is it functional? Would you actually write this equation from this word story problem?
    It does fit with the equation, it is very functional. It’s easy to read and figure out. We would write this equation from the story word problem.

    2) Does it make sense, or is it a little confusing? Discuss what is not clear, and suggest improvements.
    It is really clear, not confusing.

    3) Are there any grammatical mistakes? How should they be corrected?
    There aren’t any grammatical mistakes.

    4) Is the story creative? How could it be made better?
    It is creative because they used a comic character’s name.

    5) What are the positive points about the word problem?
    The positive points are that the problem was simple.

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  3. Jessica Rah Clare KwonNovember 1, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    1) The story fits the equation perfectly.

    2) It makes sense. It is very good.

    3) There aren’t any equations.

    4) The story is very creative.

    5) The positive points are that the story is really creative and that it was enjoyable to read this.

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  4. Jessica Rah Clare KwonNovember 1, 2011 at 10:45 PM

    *3) (There aren't any grammar mistakes.)

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  5. David Sun and Steve MinNovember 10, 2011 at 9:42 PM

    1) Does the story fit with the equation? Is it functional? Would you actually write this equation from this word story problem?
    They story fits in with the equation, functional, and simple enough to understand.
    2) Does it make sense, or is it a little confusing? Discuss what is not clear, and suggest improvements.
    This is very clear to understand.
    3) Are there any grammatical mistakes? How should they be corrected?
    There aren't any grammar mistakes and
    4) Is the story creative? How could it be made better?
    The story is creative, taking characters from a TV show was a creative Idea.
    5) What are the positive points about the word problem?
    They made it really simple and clear to understand and made the story also funny to read.

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  6. There are 100 days in Phineas and Ferb’s summer break to build the world's largest roller coaster. There are 7days a week, how many weeks has passed if there are 44 days left to build their roller coaster?

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